Team 33

I think that this is an interesting and educational story, particularly because it teaches traditions in Ancient China. It seems that the character design is feasible, however the modelling of the clothing I think would be a bit challenging. It would be great if UV textures of actual Ancient Chinese embroidery or fabric would be used. I like the design of the houses, they look very detailed in the sketches. Achieving realistic textures of the tiles and concrete would be one of the things you could focus on, as well as the texture of the clothing (e.g. how the fabric moves and flows when the characters move). Music would play an important part in your story as well, it could add more emotion to your animation and set the mood for the scenes.